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Alive and Well

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I obviously have a fic for them in my head.
The premisce is extremely simple. One year after Connor's suicide, Evan wakes up to realize that he has travelled one year back in time, on the day everything started. He has all of his memories. Immediatey, he thinks this paranormal occurence could only mean one thing:he's back here to stop Connor from killing himself. He makes it his mission. But of course he doesn't know Connor yet, and he doesn't know what kind of consequences changing anything about his fate might bring.
His actions will have big consequences, some good, some bad, but most of them far beyond his control.
This is a story about deep hate and true love, about jalousy, guilt, shame and hope. And it's very gay.
I should really write it, but I'll probably never find the time.
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

First off, the shading and blending in this picture is amazing. I love how you used some reddish tones to the give the skin a warmer tone. I honestly love the shading in the clothes a lot becuase the creases are beautiful (if that makes any sense lol). The perspective btw, is perfect.

Here are the things things I think could use some editing. The skin tone (like I said earlier is great), but I feel like it doesn’t match the background. The sky is two clear and blue that I feel Like either their skin should be brighter and not as red to match the background, or change the backgrorund to a sunset to match.

Secondly I feel like the detail under Connor’s eyes is a little too detailed. I understand that Connor is known to be constantly tired and high, but I feel like this many bags makes him look too old.

But besides that, the rest of the piece is amazing and beautiful <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>