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Japanese Sense of Reading!
Plot: Finally! He said it!!! I'm so proud!!! It's only now that the story actually begins, and it took me one year an a half to get there! XD Obviously this page was very important for the plot and for me, so I really wanted it to be as polished as possible.
Technique:Gosh, I feel like this page is my masterpiece! I have finally found a way to do my lights and shadows that I like. I'm not so convinced by the softness of colored lineart, though? It looks okay, but I like black lineart... we'll see if I keep it soft or not in the future.
First:The First Choice - Cover
Previous: The First Choice - page 6
Next: in progress...
All your comments are appreciated! I can't wait to read what you think!
Plot: Finally! He said it!!! I'm so proud!!! It's only now that the story actually begins, and it took me one year an a half to get there! XD Obviously this page was very important for the plot and for me, so I really wanted it to be as polished as possible.
Technique:Gosh, I feel like this page is my masterpiece! I have finally found a way to do my lights and shadows that I like. I'm not so convinced by the softness of colored lineart, though? It looks okay, but I like black lineart... we'll see if I keep it soft or not in the future.
First:The First Choice - Cover
Previous: The First Choice - page 6
Next: in progress...
All your comments are appreciated! I can't wait to read what you think!
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This is your most polished looking page to date. It is something to be proud of. I wasn't sure what you meant by color lines. But then I looked up and saw it mostly on the faces. So I'm sorry if I missed other examples.
I think it works. Personally. I'm also used to the black outline, so either will work for me.
The colours are good, shapes are defined and the layout is cleanly done. The first panel with the leaves is interesting done. But they don't share the same treatment of anything else out of focus on the page.
In fact, I think that is my only 'complaint'.
Well ... There is the missing path to the bench in the back, but all in all, very well done. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>